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Author Topic: Feedback/Problems you have with the story, logic etc.  (Read 1056 times)

Offline Griffin

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I'd be glad to hear any inputs or notes you have on the first pages of the story. I'm sure I'll learn a great deal from them. You can send them at johnnestuser@gmail.com

I will never be offended if its constructive criticism. Also, this is my first time writing a story and there are so many things that I still need to learn.

Ok. I replied to your previous mails (as I got a mailer error daemon on the gmail email).

I really REALLY hope those edits help you as a small guide.

Griffin

 

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