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Zectas Suggestions
« on: December 11, 2014, 05:23:03 am »
Lets put some suggestions on how to improve Zectas!!
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Re: Zectas Suggestions
« Reply #1 on: December 11, 2014, 05:33:36 am »
Need illustrations


Zectas need illustrations for characters.
It would be really good to have illustration of major characters / NPCs.
All right people, do some fan-arts and post them. Jawz will pick it up (may be).

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Re: Zectas Suggestions
« Reply #2 on: December 11, 2014, 06:13:25 am »
Yup, if it perfectly fits the characters I'll pick them up and add them ^_^
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Re: Zectas Suggestions
« Reply #3 on: December 15, 2014, 08:40:30 am »
How about having someone add a bestiary add the end of each book? With detailed explanations about beasts or something. Not about items/equipment too many other novels do this and frankly it's not worth it but a bestiary is good... I think...

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Re: Zectas Suggestions
« Reply #4 on: December 15, 2014, 09:34:11 am »
I read somewhere that you should add a detailed character status table at the end of each Volume for the main characters.
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Re: Zectas Suggestions
« Reply #5 on: December 15, 2014, 10:26:06 am »
Dedicate 30% of the time into well worded stat, skill and item description ****.

@Rex, don't forget bosses as well. For Darius it would be ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? unknown and ???

How far have you planned for the story so far?

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Re: Zectas Suggestions
« Reply #6 on: December 15, 2014, 11:57:58 am »
How about having someone add a bestiary add the end of each book? With detailed explanations about beasts or something. Not about items/equipment too many other novels do this and frankly it's not worth it but a bestiary is good... I think...

A bestiary sounds good. I'll add that for volume 2.
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Re: Zectas Suggestions
« Reply #7 on: December 15, 2014, 11:59:50 am »
I read somewhere that you should add a detailed character status table at the end of each Volume for the main characters.

There was a character stat window for Smoke and Sierra at the end of volume 2 what kind of "detailed" stat window are we talking about here? I do have some drawings done by JaneChristian for the end of volume 2 though :D
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Re: Zectas Suggestions
« Reply #8 on: December 15, 2014, 12:00:52 pm »
Dedicate 30% of the time into well worded stat, skill and item description ****.

@Rex, don't forget bosses as well. For Darius it would be ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? unknown and ???

How far have you planned for the story so far?


I already have the ending summary. the middle parts are what's missing.
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Re: Zectas Suggestions
« Reply #9 on: December 15, 2014, 01:48:58 pm »
I already have the ending summary. the middle parts are what's missing.

Then that's easy. Just picture what you want smoke to have at the end, say items, skills, combined skills. Think of what he might have lost to gain new things etc. Then make a story leading up to that.
Or time travel. Everyone loves time travel if you give them enough time.

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Re: Zectas Suggestions
« Reply #10 on: December 15, 2014, 10:15:20 pm »
Oh I meant that the summaries for the middle part are what's missing. I already have a rough idea of what he will be doing until the end. Although he often changes the story a bit as I write a chapter.
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Re: Zectas Suggestions
« Reply #11 on: December 17, 2014, 04:39:36 am »
his pet description will be like

king of the plains:its said to be as fast as an agile rabbit, tough as a hard armadillo and smart as a cunning

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Re: Zectas Suggestions
« Reply #12 on: December 17, 2014, 06:14:26 am »
his pet description will be like

king of the plains:its said to be as fast as an agile rabbit, tough as a hard armadillo and smart as a cunning

Doesn't this belong to the pet thread?
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Re: Zectas Suggestions
« Reply #13 on: December 22, 2014, 07:21:44 pm »
 smoke advantures and development is great. his companions and real world friend and family also great. it add alot for other characters to develop along side smoke like you did. the history and world developments that starting to develop and reveal show great promise.in general nothing to complain  :).
what i did come up with is the villians/rivals part is lacking for now. the only connection is by the video upload and the first encounter. this revenge seem too small for me to  move the plot. the best stories got villians you can relate to so i like them to be more involved somehow in the global and personal stories not just from the video upload competitions.
hope is helps.

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Re: Zectas Suggestions
« Reply #14 on: December 24, 2014, 09:57:26 am »
Hey John,
It's been a while since I setup Zectas page on Baka-Tsuki, So far all is good and well.
Since you have full complete volume, I set it up as full Original Light Novel rather than a teaser (without BT mods consent, but since its been few week and mods done nothing to Zectas page so I think its OK.).
I was planning on putting the Zectas link on BT's sidebar. But only mods can edit BT's front page so we need to inform the BT's mods to get it done.
The problem is that BT have strict OLN screening, but I do think Zectas will pass most of it.
Should I request BT's mods to check it out and approve the project??
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