hi john i got 1 question for u- could u pls stop using polish words such as rzeka otaczać and so on as names of items places and persons?. I don't know why u decided using polish words in your novel (though u did used some other language as well beside eng and polish) but for me native of poland that sounds very weird and i don't like it. In my opinion u should better make those name's in english. This way those names will be more understandable to others and less irritating for me. Thanks for listening to my hate. Beside this matter quite good novel. wish u luck on path of writer.
There's no way to skip out Rzeka and and Otaczac now because those are significant names in the story. But I will take note of your request and never use Polish words again...